Well I think that the editing is great and so is the way the scenes are handled it is mostly the voice acting [Some of them sound flat and have no emotion in to it. My opinion] and I think that the scenes where you have the dispatcher announcing the call out could have something besides a black screen. [This is me just being critical and all of it is just my opinion.]
I had the same opinion about the vocals. ill work more on them on the up coming episode.
Update:
Still reviewing both Harbor City and Montana Mod.
